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Dont Laugh
Posted: Mon Oct 10, 2005 11:55 am
by Dan
My friend and I recorded this yesterday. I played Lead and rhythm guitar, as well as bass. He played Drums. We both sang, but we penned lyrics in 5 minutes and basicly thats my first time writing lyrics.
http://jumpgate.theslipstream.org/mp3/cupoftea.mp3
be honest. We are no singers but tried.
Dan
Posted: Mon Oct 10, 2005 1:09 pm
by Pstehley
Posted: Mon Oct 10, 2005 1:14 pm
by Dan
ha ha so true
Posted: Tue Oct 11, 2005 7:10 am
by JEFFfromNC
I enjoyed it.
Posted: Tue Oct 11, 2005 3:07 pm
by Guesssst
Not my cup of tea, but sounds like you had some fun. Rock on.
Posted: Tue Oct 11, 2005 3:10 pm
by All Ears
Posted: Tue Oct 11, 2005 3:11 pm
by Built to Spill . . .
hmmmmm...
Posted: Wed Oct 12, 2005 3:48 pm
by Guest
Good effort... For sure some good and bad to learn from. I think it could have benefited from a little more continuity. It's kind of like you're searching for a groove but switch it up so much trying to find it that you never give the music a solid theme or feeling. There are some good ideas in it, maybe you should take what you like in it and expand those aspects in separate songs? And put a little more energy into your singing... Instead of feebly going "nanana", really try to have fun and belt it out, even if it sounds a little goofy. Like try saying, "hey, you over there" as if you're saying it to someone a foot away. Then compare it to trying to get someone's attention on the other side of the room- "Hey! You over there!". You'll notice the difference in how you assert yourself, and it's a good thing to apply to singing.
